Dear Hana,
Please look at the tracking in the documents to see my comments and if there is any suggestions for improvement on specific table, or figure or section, please do it for all . Your report can be improved by:
1. Using an appropriate APA style and be consisten.
2. The language structure and style of writing to be consistent.
3. The belending of data to support each other, instead of reporting interview and content analysis separately.
4. Interpretation and implication of each stage of the report
5. Summarize each stage of data reporting.
6. Recommendations and conclusions need to be beefed up.
7. Chapter 5, think about the "so what question" that your readers may ask after reading your report. Is it useful? how does it contribute to the field, to the practitioners, to other people who woul dlike to carry out similar exercise.
Regards,
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